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29 May 2011 @ 02:41 pm
Fic update: Words will Always Retain their Power (8/8)  
Title: “Words will Always Retain their Power”  (8/8)
Author/Artist: Gategurl/The Readers Muse
Character/Pairing: Finch/Dominic
Rating: Mature (R)
Warning/Notes: Adult language, slash, completed.
Summary: “For better or for worse it seemed that V, whoever he might have truly been, had succeeded. Parliament and Big Ben had been reduced to a gloriously charred snarl of smouldering rubble, dust, broken brick and bent metal slats. And now, it seemed that only time would tell if it had truly been for the good of it all..”

Words will always retain their power - Chapter 8
 
 
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Crocodile_Eat_Ucrocodile_eat_u on May 30th, 2011 09:41 pm (UTC)
Ohhhhhhhhhhhh you finished it! I was so excited seeing this! Belive it or not, the day before I checked to see if I had missed the last chapter! You have to be psychic or something! XD

This was wonderful! The whole story was beautiful and dreamy and succulent and so bloody gorgeous. It was powerful and heart wrenching and Im so happy you wrote this! Your writing is so amazing and breathtaking I cant even begin to quote every metaphor you used that stopped my heart <3

Thank you so much for this- it was such a beautiful journey. <3<3 I think I'm gonna read it again. ^^
Gategurl: Telsa - Neckgategurl on May 30th, 2011 09:44 pm (UTC)
You flatter me darling. And I adore you for it, really.

I am not going to lie this was a 'Mordor trek' fic to write. But I have to say, that I was quite happy with it. It was one of those stories that was tough to write, but infinitely rewarding. Rewarding especially with comments and reviews like yours, especially considering the small nature of the fandom and pairing and the length of time since the movie came out.

Long story short, we might need to get married again.

PS: ICON Squee.
Crocodile_Eat_Ucrocodile_eat_u on May 30th, 2011 09:52 pm (UTC)
It's true though. I swear it.

Of course it was rewarding! You need to remember the film is infintely popular. It'll come on TV one day, someone will watch it, get an idea and serach for fic, and will see yours. It was so bloody good, I really can't begin to fully explain how much I adore this! *hugs*

And yes, we really do need to get married again. Most definitely. Ah you make me want to download this film and watch it again! I've been itching to all weekend now!

Gategurl: Finch AND Dominicgategurl on May 30th, 2011 09:56 pm (UTC)
Dude, seriously, do it. That is one movie I never seen to be able to get enough of. That and "Watchman", I only just discovered the fandom and have recently become possessed. Rorschach and Dan slash...It is like a heart attack of awesome wrapped up in a confusing looking enigma, wrapped up in a b vegan burrito that you still aren't quite sure about.
Crocodile_Eat_Ucrocodile_eat_u on May 30th, 2011 10:04 pm (UTC)
Lol I attempted to explain to my sister how this film changed ma life the other day! She wasn't having it, did not belive me one bit. ¬________¬ But god I love this film so bloody much! Might have to watch it and write a bit of finch/dominic myself! ;D Oh I havent seen watchmen yet! I keep meaning to though!
Gategurl: Daryl - black and whitegategurl on May 30th, 2011 10:07 pm (UTC)
Oooooo. Yes. *makes grabby hands* Get to work on that, we need more Dominic/Finch fic. And smut. Smmmmmmmmmmmuttttttt. *STARES OFF INTO THE DISTANCE DREAMILY*

OKAY. This is your homework assignment. Go watch the Watchmen. (*snerk* get it?! ...okay that was a terrible pun..shhh!) I mean it. Then pm me and we will discuss your thoughts. And yes, I am serious.
Crocodile_Eat_Ucrocodile_eat_u on May 30th, 2011 10:09 pm (UTC)
Lol! Alrighty I'll do it. XD Ill try and download it now.

And Finch/Dominic smut? Is that a challenge m'dear? ;D
Gategurlgategurl on May 30th, 2011 10:10 pm (UTC)
YES. YES IT IS A CHALLENGE.

*puts her hands on her hips and begins what will likely be an epic trans-internet staring contest.*
Crocodile_Eat_Ucrocodile_eat_u on May 30th, 2011 10:14 pm (UTC)
*stares back at you*

Fine! The gauntlet has been thrown! I accept your challenge! I will bring forth the Finch/Dominic smut!

Any particular requests, things you'd like in it? I'm pretty open. ;D
Gategurl: Finch/Dominic - dead endsgategurl on May 30th, 2011 10:14 pm (UTC)
Oooh. I could give you prompts? Mayyyyyyyyyyybe?
Crocodile_Eat_Ucrocodile_eat_u on May 30th, 2011 10:18 pm (UTC)
Oh yeah give me some prompts. Anything you like, I'll write anything. ;)
Gategurl: I vouched vengeance against...shit!gategurl on May 30th, 2011 10:19 pm (UTC)
You are probably going to regret this you know. Give me 5 minutes.
Crocodile_Eat_Ucrocodile_eat_u on May 30th, 2011 10:20 pm (UTC)
.............

............

Nah it'll be fine. XD

Gategurl: Finch - Churngategurl on May 30th, 2011 10:26 pm (UTC)
AHEM. I will just leave this here...

Finch/Dominic: Dominic gets jealous. Authors choice other wise.

Finch/Dominic: Word prompts: Afternoon tea, habits, worn arm chairs.

Finch/Dominic: Their first time was in the supply closet in the office. They were both still splattered in blood from the shoot out. Finch has a graze still bleeding across his cheek. Dominic thinks he had never wanted anything more then he has ever wanted this.

Finch/Dominic: Dominic is going through out CTV footage and finds a still picture of a much younger Finch exiting a bar on an undercover job. Authors choice from there.

Finch/Dominic: There is a worn leather jacket in Finch’s hall closet. Dominic can never quite bring himself to ask about it.

Finch/Dominic: Sentence prompt: “This was the type of thing the warranted another cup of coffee.”

Finch/Dominic: Their first meeting.

Finch/Dominic: The first time Finch called Dominic by his give name.

Finch/Dominic: It took Dominic a while, but he soon learned that silence could mean far more then the meaning of mere words.

Finch/Dominic: Word prompts: new suit, bourbon breath.
Gategurl: Daryl. Busy.gategurl on May 30th, 2011 10:31 pm (UTC)
You know what the worst part is? I had to literally STOP myself.
Crocodile_Eat_Ucrocodile_eat_u on May 30th, 2011 10:55 pm (UTC)
My word! You went all out didn't you? XD

Ah they're good picks! I like a couple of them already! I'm not going to tell you which one I'm going to do though- I'll keep it a surprise for you. <3
Gategurl: Daryl - orange.gategurl on May 30th, 2011 10:58 pm (UTC)
*bounces up and down happily* I am TOTALLY enthused about this right now.
OMG YOU ARE SO MEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAN
Crocodile_Eat_Ucrocodile_eat_u on May 30th, 2011 11:03 pm (UTC)
Nooooooo I'm not! It's a present! Has to be a surprise! :P

Heheheh I'm excited too! Already brainstorming a monsoon of ideas! All equally as smutty as eachother. XD
Gategurl: Finch - The moment V's broadcastgategurl on May 30th, 2011 11:05 pm (UTC)
Even better! I am await this with HUGE..HUGE anticipation!

*whines about wanting her present*
Crocodile_Eat_Ucrocodile_eat_u on May 30th, 2011 11:07 pm (UTC)
Heheh! You shall get it soon! Just be patient my dear! <3 I cant promise it'll be as good as yours but I'll give it a go. <3
Gategurl: Daryl - Colorgategurl on May 30th, 2011 11:10 pm (UTC)
Oh please! Yours is going to be totally bangin'. Between you and me, we might just fill up this com with deliciousness!
Crocodile_Eat_Ucrocodile_eat_u on May 30th, 2011 11:11 pm (UTC)
Hahah! Probably will! XD But in my opinon, you can't have too much smut! AND THERE CERTAINLY ISN'T ENOUGH D/F SMUT! Where is it all????? Sigh......
Gategurl: Finch/Dominic - dead endsgategurl on May 30th, 2011 11:12 pm (UTC)
UM. Waiting for us to write?
Crocodile_Eat_Ucrocodile_eat_u on May 30th, 2011 11:17 pm (UTC)
Lol! Probably! Still though.....

Well if you want things done, you've got to do them yourself! Come! Lets unite in this journey to bring smutty ficcery to the comm!

Although we already are married.
Gategurl: Finch AND Dominicgategurl on May 30th, 2011 11:19 pm (UTC)
OMG I HATE YOU. Guess what i just started.
THIS. THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT.
I was already working on a fic god damnit.
You and me are going to have some words.
Crocodile_Eat_Ucrocodile_eat_u on May 30th, 2011 11:21 pm (UTC)
WHAT? GURL DON'T YOU BE LYING TO ME?????

MORE FINCH/DOMINIC????

\O/
Gategurl: Daryl - Colorgategurl on May 30th, 2011 11:23 pm (UTC)
You and your fricken request for prompts. I try you so hard right now. Not going to lie. I didn't think I even HAD another Finch/Dominic story in me. HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE'CHEW.

Okay, I am not posting mine until you post yours. This is a promise.
Crocodile_Eat_Ucrocodile_eat_u on May 30th, 2011 11:27 pm (UTC)
OH MY GOD YESSSSSSSH! More fic! Admit it you luuuuuuuv me thats why you're doing it! Give in to the Dominic/Finch temptation!

WHAT???? NO!!!!! I must read it! And I'm a horribly slow writer! At least tell me your idea! PAAAAAWEAAAAAASE????? *puppy eyes*
Gategurl: Telsa - Neckgategurl on May 30th, 2011 11:29 pm (UTC)
Only if you share yours. *evil smirk*. And also, I am a slow writer too.
Crocodile_Eat_Ucrocodile_eat_u on May 30th, 2011 11:44 pm (UTC)
Noooo because it's your prompt! That would spoil the surprise! XD

Coooooome on, what's your one?? *offers cookies*
Gategurlgategurl on May 30th, 2011 11:45 pm (UTC)
Actually we might want to actually share them because mine is kinda related to one of the prompts too.

YOU FIRST! *stares mulishly*
Crocodile_Eat_Ucrocodile_eat_u on May 30th, 2011 11:51 pm (UTC)
*glares* Fiiiiiiiiiiiine~~~~~

I love this one- Finch/Dominic: The first time Finch called Dominic by his given name. So I think I'm doing this one, although I might combine some other prompts together with this one. ^^

YOU NEXT!
Gategurl: Daryl - Colorgategurl on May 30th, 2011 11:52 pm (UTC)
Oooh. I like this. Good choice.
I am going with the leather jacket prompt. Dominic's point of view.
Crocodile_Eat_Ucrocodile_eat_u on June 1st, 2011 12:34 pm (UTC)
Oooooooooooooh! Can't wait to read it! That prompt sounded good! ^^
Gategurl: Daryl - Colorgategurl on June 1st, 2011 02:32 pm (UTC)
Dude, likewise. Have you gotten anywhere with yours?
Crocodile_Eat_Ucrocodile_eat_u on June 1st, 2011 02:45 pm (UTC)
Guiltily, I haven't started it yet. ^^; I've downloaded the movie and am watching it for ideas and inspiration. But I've planned it out in my head already!

What about you?
Gategurl: Daryl - orange.gategurl on June 1st, 2011 02:52 pm (UTC)
I have about a dozen sentences on paper scraps, a few more in word document, and a rough plan in my head. I was planning on watching the movie tonight as well. *whoo great minds*

*looks at the time* *has a temper tantrum* *DO NOT WANT WORK TODAY*

PS: I wonder if we should take this conversation to email or not? Or create a new post altogether about prompt supporting or something.
Crocodile_Eat_Ucrocodile_eat_u on June 1st, 2011 03:04 pm (UTC)
High five for simultanious thinking! *high five* I'm trying to listen to Finch's voice and stuff so when I start writing, it sounds ok. ^^;

Oh yeah we should probably switch to email or something. My email is-

demonic_sanity@hotmail.co.uk

Gategurl: Finch - Churngategurl on June 1st, 2011 03:15 pm (UTC)
Cool. Just sent you a test email.

*It is an email from North America! BAM! We have the technology!*